tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post8894714194623614839..comments2023-12-02T05:20:39.893-08:00Comments on अगड़म- बगड़म AGDAM- BAGDAM : मुझको फिर से उड़ना सिखा दे या मौला ...../ mujhe fir se udna sikha de ya maula...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comBlogger52125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-61799353742640189892011-02-26T09:04:44.399-08:002011-02-26T09:04:44.399-08:00अच्छे भाव समेटे बढ़िया रचना .
हमारे प्रयास में स...अच्छे भाव समेटे बढ़िया रचना .<br /><br /><br />हमारे प्रयास में सहयोगी बने फालोवर बनके उत्साह वर्धन करिए<br />आइये हमारे साथ <br /><br /><a href="http://uttarpradeshbloggerassociation.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"> यूबीए पर </a>Mithilesh dubeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14946039933092627903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-53691020802811048662011-02-26T08:56:27.196-08:002011-02-26T08:56:27.196-08:00बहुत खूब!बहुत खूब!अनूप शुक्लhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07001026538357885879noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-11695022795332469122011-01-05T04:13:52.781-08:002011-01-05T04:13:52.781-08:00tooooo gooodddd yaar!tooooo gooodddd yaar!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05071860582073210744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-9795292437062416502010-12-24T11:05:56.706-08:002010-12-24T11:05:56.706-08:00Kya main aapke blog par apni kavita likhne ke liye...Kya main aapke blog par apni kavita likhne ke liye bhej sakta hu.<br /><br />Mujhe is kavita ke shuru ke panktiyon se kuch vichar aaye hai... agar aap chahe toh main aapke liye likhne ki koshish karunga chahe woh is kavita se prerit ho ya fir koi nayi kavita hodeepakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18249761923522095679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-21002140261305329872010-09-28T12:06:10.873-07:002010-09-28T12:06:10.873-07:00Waah Neeraj Bhai kya baat hai....
Kya Khoob Kaha H...Waah Neeraj Bhai kya baat hai....<br />Kya Khoob Kaha Hai..<br />Manjul...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-45557414523194404202010-09-13T01:49:43.475-07:002010-09-13T01:49:43.475-07:00dhnywaad meenu jidhnywaad meenu jiAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-2822787888927580782010-09-10T01:24:49.497-07:002010-09-10T01:24:49.497-07:00Impressive.Impressive.Meenu Kharehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12551759946025269086noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-37631297117377257802010-08-19T02:19:16.007-07:002010-08-19T02:19:16.007-07:00thanx kavita jithanx kavita jiAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-90400790399512327142010-08-18T07:31:51.528-07:002010-08-18T07:31:51.528-07:00क़त्ल होना चाहता हूँ उन निगाहों से
मुझको कातिल का...क़त्ल होना चाहता हूँ उन निगाहों से <br />मुझको कातिल का पता दे या मौला <br /><br />ye hasile-gazal sher hua.ice.Dr. kavita 'kiran' (poetess)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10137044674020780363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-29609410650385301272010-08-12T05:25:09.179-07:002010-08-12T05:25:09.179-07:00koi dard nahi hai alka ji .......... bas u hi likh...koi dard nahi hai alka ji .......... bas u hi likh diya.........Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-79085662601802143952010-08-10T13:09:43.088-07:002010-08-10T13:09:43.088-07:00lagta hai humhara dil mein bahut dard hai..it has ...lagta hai humhara dil mein bahut dard hai..it has lot of depth..well doneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-54892250062213153372010-08-05T22:39:44.830-07:002010-08-05T22:39:44.830-07:00thanx pankaj ji......thanx pankaj ji......Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-90467600745587516552010-08-04T07:57:21.170-07:002010-08-04T07:57:21.170-07:00fir sikha de udna ya mula ,,,,,,,,,adbudh ,alenkre...fir sikha de udna ya mula ,,,,,,,,,adbudh ,alenkret,suspast ,susyojit ,dil ko chu le ,man ke taro ko hila de .lekhni ko shabdo ka libah pahna ke dulhen ki trah sajaya hi ,is tanaoo bhare jewan me prem sash ki wersha krta rh 2 ,hum to dewane ho gy kavita ke .muje intjar hi lekhni ke nay rang ka ,,PANKAJ DUBEYASTROWORLDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16481877586004137031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-49147602251803644102010-08-01T23:02:29.333-07:002010-08-01T23:02:29.333-07:00thanx vijay bhai ........thanx vijay bhai ........Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-66329925420179977262010-07-31T01:43:22.039-07:002010-07-31T01:43:22.039-07:00उसको मुझसे प्यार है मुझको पता है
ये बात उसको भी ब...उसको मुझसे प्यार है मुझको पता है <br />ये बात उसको भी बता दे या मौला<br /><br />waah neeraj bhai waah , kya kahne , bahut khoob mere dost ,bahut khobvijay kumar sappattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06924893340980797554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-38215951486511859952010-07-29T23:02:39.209-07:002010-07-29T23:02:39.209-07:00धन्यवाद लोकेन्द्र भाई .........
राहुल जी आपका ये ...धन्यवाद लोकेन्द्र भाई .........<br /><br />राहुल जी आपका ये कमेन्ट किसी और रचना के लिए है ........... फिर भी धन्यवाद .............Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-79712742187465204432010-07-29T12:40:03.496-07:002010-07-29T12:40:03.496-07:00क़त्ल होना चाहता हूँ उन निगाहों से
मुझको कातिल का...क़त्ल होना चाहता हूँ उन निगाहों से <br />मुझको कातिल का पता दे या मौलालोकेन्द्र सिंहhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08323684688206959895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-40530197320871700512010-07-29T07:22:31.640-07:002010-07-29T07:22:31.640-07:00भाव तो अच्छे सधे हैं, बुंदेली भी अपने मिजाज सहित ...भाव तो अच्छे सधे हैं, बुंदेली भी अपने मिजाज सहित आई है. बधाई.Rahul Singhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16364670995288781667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-48741357368304142622010-07-25T22:03:29.132-07:002010-07-25T22:03:29.132-07:00ये शेर मुझे भी पसंद है... धन्यवाद हरकीरत जीये शेर मुझे भी पसंद है... धन्यवाद हरकीरत जीAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-84187847019482833122010-07-25T03:46:58.346-07:002010-07-25T03:46:58.346-07:00उसको मुझसे प्यार है मुझको पता है
ये बात उसको भी ब...उसको मुझसे प्यार है मुझको पता है <br />ये बात उसको भी बता दे या मौला <br /><br />वाह...वाह ..क्या बात है ....उसके प्यार का पता उसे ही नहीं ....बहुत खूब .....!!हरकीरत ' हीर'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09462263786489609976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-3807757259512083342010-07-16T02:00:17.917-07:002010-07-16T02:00:17.917-07:00abhi tak to life mein nahi aya hai ...
par aapko a...abhi tak to life mein nahi aya hai ...<br />par aapko apka pyaar yaad aagya matlab meri kavita sarthak ho gayi ..... dhnywaad monu....Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-57602274146287752562010-07-16T01:57:08.207-07:002010-07-16T01:57:08.207-07:00jaise is kavita ko pada to laga koi apki life me a...jaise is kavita ko pada to laga koi apki life me aga aur mujh apna pyar yaad aga dil ko chhugai tumari kavita its goodUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00728465521281589802noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-23247254157044885772010-07-14T02:22:06.725-07:002010-07-14T02:22:06.725-07:00dhnywaad priyanka..........dhnywaad priyanka..........Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-26801976909755552902010-07-13T11:16:49.619-07:002010-07-13T11:16:49.619-07:00shabdo sy bhut accha khalty ho neerajshabdo sy bhut accha khalty ho neerajpriyankanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8122841481440553072.post-41734937098724999842010-07-07T04:38:59.870-07:002010-07-07T04:38:59.870-07:00धन्यवाद ज्योत्सना जी .............धन्यवाद ज्योत्सना जी .............Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11191788978333653305noreply@blogger.com